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He never found that one person who cared
and suffered hardships too much to bear.
His Life full of let downs, one after another,
his emotions shut down and quickly smothered.
Always down on his luck, he took all the blows,
he started to think that's just how it goes.
No chance of love, he didn't care to start
and rumours told of his frozen heart.
Then two big brown eyes,
and one cold nose,
it's tail it wagged.
as him it chose.
This faithful friend
came to his side
it warmed his heart,
lit within a fire.
With a playful yelp,
gave one soft paw.
His heart of ice
began to thaw.
Two lost souls found love to share,
so for a puppy's love just beware
and suffered hardships too much to bear.
His Life full of let downs, one after another,
his emotions shut down and quickly smothered.
Always down on his luck, he took all the blows,
he started to think that's just how it goes.
No chance of love, he didn't care to start
and rumours told of his frozen heart.
Then two big brown eyes,
and one cold nose,
it's tail it wagged.
as him it chose.
This faithful friend
came to his side
it warmed his heart,
lit within a fire.
With a playful yelp,
gave one soft paw.
His heart of ice
began to thaw.
Two lost souls found love to share,
so for a puppy's love just beware
Suzanne K 10.03. 2015
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My entry for the poetry competition in this group poetry-on-the-mind.deviantart.… I chose the category "Frozen Heart"
Won 2nd prize
Poetry contest - March - WINNERSFirstly, I´d like to thank everyone for their entries. You posted really beautiful and interesting poems and it was hard to chose only three winners. I´m also glad that all three themes inspired you and we got lot of entries for each theme.
And now, without more dalays, let me introduce you the winners:
1. place: by :iconverityvirtue:
100 by lulu-illussions
poem request by lulu-illussions
feature in Poetry-on-the-mind
feature by allecca
critique on deviation of your choice by lulu-illussions
visualization of poem by JoyousInsomnia
drawing/illustration of the winner's poem by VidelsEnigma
2. place: by :iconsupach:
50 by lulu-illussions
[Bullet; Black] haiku request by lulu-illussions
[Bullet; Black] feature in Poetry-on-the-mind
[Bullet; Black] feature by :deva
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Oh hell! ~ I proper enjoyed that! ~ really did ~