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I can´t let you go,
not now, gosh no!
It wouldn´t feel right,
I still need you so.
A line in a poem
said "Please set me free"
but what is then left?
A wreck that was me.
I am already half
the person I was,
so setting you free
would defeat the cause
of trying to keep myself together,
your memory being the only tether,
that keeps my soul from falling apart
and breathes some life into my broken heart.
So I can´t let you go,
not ever, Hell NO!
21st February 2016
not now, gosh no!
It wouldn´t feel right,
I still need you so.
A line in a poem
said "Please set me free"
but what is then left?
A wreck that was me.
I am already half
the person I was,
so setting you free
would defeat the cause
of trying to keep myself together,
your memory being the only tether,
that keeps my soul from falling apart
and breathes some life into my broken heart.
So I can´t let you go,
not ever, Hell NO!
21st February 2016
Literature
speak up before it's too late
it saddens me deeply
how the difference
between making your life
and taking your life
is a single letter
remember the importance
of words-
speak up before it's too late
Literature
Wish I Could
Wish I could turn back time
Wish I could stop the fall
Wish I could see the future
Wish I could change it all
Literature
Where's The Art, Deviantart?
There are many forms of art,
But because of Deviantart,
It's all falling apart.
Because now the site,
Is for all drawers alike,
As they always get promoted,
While the other's are left behind.
But why is it right,
To ignore the rest,
Like Writers,
Photographers,
And even comic book Illustrators?
You raise the money,
For the core members,
Without even questioning,
Or giving us warnings.
And contests,
Are nothing more but for advertisement,
For a movie or game,
Because it makes money.
So before I end this poem,
I really need to know.
Will you accept our art,
Deviantart?
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This is amazing. you should check out my "Against all odds" in my account.