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Flawed Nursery Rhyme

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Old mother Hubbard,
bought herself a skateboard
and on her first ride down the street.
It looked like she was coping
but the whole time she was hoping
that she would land on her feet.
Now accidents can happen
but when she started flappin
her arms like two sticks of wood.
The people began staring
cos somehow she was scaring,
all the dogs in the neighbourhood

Poetry by Suzanne Karbach

3rd December 2015.
 A little Limerick style poem witten for word prompt > flawedliterature.deviantart.co…

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Fly my pretties, fly!

OK, that doesn't really fit, but I bet that is what the dog's were thinking.
That last line is a great punchline.  It made me laugh.Thumbs up okay