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Catch my dreams
and send them back,
so I can hope for solace.

Catch my dreams,
let me once more see,
your sweet angelic face.

Hold me up
in your strong arms,
show me heaven above.

Catch my dreams,
they´re just for you,
to thank you for your love.


Poetry by Suzanne Karbach
7th December 2015
For the weekly writing prompt flawedliterature.deviantart.co…
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LittleG042415 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
OMG!! This poem ALMOST made me cry.
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Supach Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
:aww: sorry, Yes sometimes I am like that too :'(
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LittleG042415 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
It's alright.  I'm happy that i'm still here, and that I have myself.  That's what keeps me going.
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slestualenergie Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015
OMG! This is phenomenal. Simple yet moving. My kind of poem. ;) 
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Supach Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for your lovely comment Pleased you enjoyed the poem :)
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slestualenergie Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015
Hehe. No problem. Thank you for the great poem.
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vanndra Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
A beautiful poem Suzanne. It's so obvious that it came straight from your heart at  a time when we miss most, those we will love forever :hugs:
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Supach Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug: thanks Ann and for the :star: too :heart:



Snow by Digithalie  Merry christmas by Digithalie   a bit early but visiting my Mum next week so looking forward to seeing my family in England
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vanndra Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome Suzannw :). Have a great Christmas with your family in England :hug:

Christmas Friends by KmyGraphic  
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Lugia20711 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015  Student Writer
Beautiful work!:) (Smile) Clap  This is the time of year when we are nicer to people, we are more generous, and we remember the more important things in life.
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Supach Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :hug:

and for the :star: too :)
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shelleypalmer Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Very moving.  Beautifully expressed at this time of year when gifts are given with love.  This poem is a gift. 
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Supach Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh gosh what a lovely thing to say. I ´ve been feeling very down for about 4 days now I am not looking forward to Christmas and have been wishing it was all behind me. The slightest thing makes my eyes water and the skin around them is all rough from being wet all the time:( I don´t know where this poem came from I just liked the prompt and as I can almost never remember my dreams I thought maybe that certain some one could catch them for me and send them back)Silent cry 
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shelleypalmer Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Truly sorry that you feel down but this is an emotional time of year when you have lost someone.  It was a special poem - a gift for that person and for those who can relate to its message - and I know that it will be appreciated. It's a shame that you don't remember your dreams very often - hope you get some nice ones soon and that they will lift your spirits. 
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Supach Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Can´t read again I have water in my eyes wait a mo......

Thanks Shelly, yes  it would be nice to remember them a bit more often. I´ve tried talking myself into remembering before I go to sleep but it ´s not working.

Have a lovely week :hug:
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iriscup Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015
This is so beautiful, the best poetry i've ever read. Nod Clap Clap Love Hug

Happy dreams dear Suzanne.
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Supach Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
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wtf? i dont know...i mean love Thank you so much dear IrisHeart Emoticon 
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